Listening
by Elouise
Is it any wonder children loved Amy Carmichael? This past week I’ve sometimes wished for an Amy to make a happy appearance in my life. Instead, I found this lighthearted yet fully realistic take on life when things aren’t quite the way we’d like them to be. So now I’m listening for bubbles!
Listening
I sat in a greenwood.
A foaming torrent drummed,
“The Lord is great!” “And He is good,”
A tiny insect hummed.A wild bird sang, “And kind,
Oh, we have found Him so.”
And then a soft and pleasant wind
Sang, “Kind,” as he did blow.The young leaves whispered, “Yes.”
The mosses by the mere
Murmured, “We love His gentleness.”
A fern said, “He is dear.”A little flower looked up,
A smilet on her face;
Sweet food lay in her open cup,
A butterfly said grace.* * * * *
The good sun clouded o’er—
Birds, butterflies withdrew;
The wind shook leaves down on the floor;
The sky hid all her blue.Mist lay upon the hill;
Sharp rain the river smote;
But on its glancing surface still
I saw bright bubbles float.They caught the fading light
That was so fain to go;
The waterway was as the white
Of moonbeams upon the snow.And as they shone and broke
In simple gaiety,
I was aware of One who spoke
By bubbles unto me.Amy Carmichael, Mountain Breezes: The Collected Poems of Amy Carmichael, p. 16. © 1999, The Dohnavur Fellowship, published by Christian Literature Crusade. First published in Made in the Pans (1917), and Pans (prior to 1917)
© Elouise Renich Fraser, 29 December 2014
She is my favorite! Thank you for sharing this and other writings—but mostly for sharing your heart so much in your blog. ~DV
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You’re so welcome, DV! It’s a pleasure.
Elouise
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I have not read this poem before, even though I have read a number of things about Amy and by her. Her book “If” has had a profound influence on me – more as I have grown older than when I first read it. There is so much in nature that speaks to me of God. Yesterday, I was late leaving for church and was afraid I was going to be late to play the prelude. (Fortunately, I got there in time.) But it was raining most of the way and just as I turned to go up the road to the church, I saw a faint but beautiful rainbow. God’s promises never fail. So why do I so often need a reminder? I wonder if Jesus suffered with head colds, flu, and other viruses that plague us. I am glad that I am better; just hoping for 100% improvement soon. Hope you are feeling better as well.
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We do need reminders, don’t we? Maybe that’s the way God meant it to be? I’m definitely keyed into the concrete moment and what’s happening around me. Thanks for your lovely comment and good wishes. I’m glad you saw a rainbow yesterday.
Elouise
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