caught unawares
by Elouise
caught unawares
poised between heaven and earth
pilgrims journey home
When will the sun set?
Who will return tomorrow?
Will the bridge remain?
steady footsteps
drum softly in fading light
glowing with promise
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© Elouise Renich Fraser, 10 June 2017
Photo found at pixabay.com – Burmese Foot Bridge at Sunset
Response to WordPress Daily Prompt: Revelation
beautiful piece E and the colors in the sky in the pic are amazing. I love sunsets ❤ on the computer, not too many emojis to play with here….sorry 🙂
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I agree this was beautiful!
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Thank you kindly! So glad you enjoyed it.
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You wouldn’t catch me up there, on that bridge, for love nor money.
I espy some seats up there too!
Are they escaper’s from that lovely park of yours?
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Looks a bit dicey to me, too–the bridge, that is. I also took note of the lovely seats and was happy to see some were being used! 🙂
I think you’ll need to interview them to get an answer to your question. Too bad. 🙂
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I find it very difficult interviewing wooden seats, they’re worse than many people I know! 🙄
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Glad to give you a moment of mirth! Even though it wasn’t planned…. 🙂 Good catch, Brian.
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At least it proves I look at and read your posts 😳
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You’re the best! 💐
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