The greatest gift
by Elouise
When I began blogging, I didn’t give much thought to writing poems. I loved to write. I loved using imagery. I loved playing things out in words. And I loved reading poetry.
But writing it myself? Not since my freshman year of college, when my writing professor told me I would never write poetry. I believed her. Until I began blogging.
This morning I read the poem below. I’ve read it many times, always accompanied by tears of gratitude along with recognition that my life is in its final chapter. I hope you enjoy it and are prompted to remember things that bring joy and music into your heart and mind.
music to my ears
I love the calm cadence of your voice
and the way you make rare
the everyday
waves rolling in on the beach
wind whispering in the willows
my husband reading to me aloud
Mendelssohn’s E Major Song Without Words
J. S. Bach’s C Major Prelude #1
doves cooing in the morning
robins singing in dusky evening
the overwhelming calm of Psalm 23
I chose the Bach rendition above because of the player’s calm approach to Bach’s Prelude in C Major. Also because it’s being played by a so-called amateur who gets the nuances just right.
Wishing you a calming Tuesday no matter what’s going on around you,
Elouise♥
© Elouise Renich Fraser, 2/22/2022
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i ve written stuff since grade
seven
geraldine published me
so writer s write
pray continue
conched and all the other stuff too
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Thanks, utahan15 🙏🏻
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aka John
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Thanks, John. 🙏🏻
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❤
Marilyn
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💜💕
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how to acknowledge deep moments of beauty “on this side”, while knowing we are moving to the “other side”….grieving, yet rejoicing…in faith?
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Just – at 5:50pm – just when I needed some beauty…
Thank you for providing it!, and for being part of it!
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You’re welcome, Debbie. 💐
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That was beautiful but brought back a memory I try to forget. I was doing second year English at university. I’d done four years of medicine years earlier but didn’t graduate. So I went back to uni when my eldest was about 14. I’d spent hours and hours writing about a book I had read. The professor/ lecturer basically told me it was worthless and I really shouldn’t have bothered. With my older children doing housework to “help mummy study” and a husband who seemed to work 24/7 I dropped out. I’m not sad about the way my life worked out from then on but cruel truths can be cruel. It was probably the truth but he didn’t even tell why or how I could have done it differently. Two years ago – I went back to do grade 12 English at night school. With a very helpful teacher and my brother John’s amazing help over the phone I got a distinction. Loved the Bach.
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Hi, Robin! It’s great to hear from you. If I were grading that professor/lecturer…. Need I say more? Good for you for going back to night school, and for receiving a distinction! Cheers to John, as well! You once told me he was a good bloke. 😊
Your memory reminds me of my algebra teacher in 8th grade. For reasons she never explained,she told me I should never take geometry. I took it anyway, and loved it much more than algebra. Though I’ll take Bach over math of any kind! 🎶 Praying all is well with you these days.
Elouise
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Yes he’s a pretty good bloke. He lives about 2500 kilometres away so we don’t see each other. I preferred algebra to geometry. 😀
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