the long walk home
by Elouise
I wonder—
Do breathless trees
dusky skies
and lengthening shadows
remember what they see
beneath fading twilight
swathed in heavy garments
unsure of her destination
Is this a woman? I think so. She seems to be taking the long walk home. Which may or may not be that dark cottage hovering in the background, watching as she makes her way.
Is she alone? I think not. The trees, skies and passing shadows reveal more than what’s happening on the ground or in the background. If this world is God’s poem (thank you, Mary Oliver), we have reason to hope. Not because of the play of light in the trees, on the ground or in the background, but because of the Light that shines even in our darkest hours.
Sometimes, perhaps always, we must leave home to find our true home. Or better, to be found by God’s everyday angels in this world that belongs not to us, but to God.
©Elouise Renich Fraser, 14 November 2017
Autumn Landscape at Dusk, 1885, by Vincent van Gogh found at Wikiart.com
Daily Prompt: Dubious
I always thought poetry had to rhyme; and sort of had to have a rhythm if you can understand what I mean; like in the old nursery rhymes.
Nothing in that poem does; so is it a poem or just some words strung together to paint a picture?
If so I reckon I could do that 🙂
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You could do that, Brian! It’s called free verse, and yes, it’s a form of poetry. It does have a cadence, though not a repeated rhythmic pattern. And it doesn’t need to rhyme. I prefer reading free verse (mine or anyone else’s) out loud–in order to capture the flow of thought and its musicality. Just right for us old folks! 🙂
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Who you calling old? 😈
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I love the lingering light at the edge of the horizon….like hope and a beacon waiting to guide ❤ excellence E ❤
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