dawn walk
by Elouise
dawn walk
beating heart
strong steady
*****
A Musical Adventure
Best performed outside in a sing-songy voice
Wearing cushioned sneakers
On any spring, summer or fall morning
Accent the first word/s of each line, two beats per line
Begin with haiku above⇑ and proceed directly to⇒
feet fall
into step
steady now-don’t
rush-the pace
I’m-not sure
how long
this-will last-or
how far
this-will go-or
what lies
at-the end
don’t-get bored
just-keep go-ing
look-a round
take-it in
birds sing
in-the distance
squirrels bicker
in-the trees
think-deep thoughts
sing-a song-make-
up a rhyme
any thing-to
pass-the time
pace slows
just-a bit
sip water
check-my heart-beat
back at-it
up-the hill
all-the way
gaining strength
step-by step
focus now
nearly there
step step
step step
slow-down now
sip water
mop brow
home free!
Haiku written 6 July 2012
© Elouise Renich Fraser, 29 April 2014
Wow. This is good. It has a double meaning- referring to the morning walk, but could also refer to our walk through life. Well done.
Aunt Leta
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Thanks for the comment, Leta. You’re absolutely right.
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