On this side of death
by Elouise
On this side of death
Life seems far away
Cold and unforgiving
A half-remembered song
Of dreamers now turned
A certain age still pushing
The limits of what body
And soul can take without
Warning or a notice in
The mail reminding us
The deadline for renewal
Is approaching
This morning the calendar
Says Spring is in the air
Yet all I see are fog and the
Stubborn snow of Winter
Still frozen on the ground
Hanging on for dear life
Reluctant to cede even
Half an inch of space to
Birds announcing it’s time
For warmth and loveliness
In the face of barrenness
And last Fall’s rot
Cars rush by outside
Perhaps they know what
I don’t know about what’s
Happening and where to
Find it when wheels are
Greased and running smooth
No hiccups or tremors
Or faintness of muscles and
Limbs aiming to make it
From one room to the next
Without colliding into
One’s own precarious
Body and soul
© Elouise Renich Fraser, 29 March 2018
Photo of the Gazebo at Longwood Gardens found at tripadvisor.com
The word that comes to mind is “awareness.” So many of us live so much of our lives unaware of how fragile, how precious, how fleeting life is, and then…awareness comes. Sometimes it arrives gently over time, but not always, and when it interrupts, like the slamming of a door, we who are planners – preparers – hit the wall, slide to the floor, and think about how to – or whether to – get back up and continue living. Thank you, Elouise, for reminding us all that life is precious – today – whether it seems foggy, or crystal clear.
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I love your description, Debbie. It’s spot on! Especially for planners…. 🙂
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I’m struck with the “half-remembered” phrase. Beautiful, as is the entire poem. Reminds me of section V of T.S. Eliot’s Little Gidding. (“…heard, half-heard, in the stillness between two waves of the sea…” )
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Thank you, Meg!
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What an amazing poem, Elouise!! I think it’s one of your best, if not THE best. Meg’s comparison with “Little Gidding” is apt, and Debbie’s comment about us planners “hitting the walls” really hits home (ouch!). Wishing you blessings at this holy season and holding you in prayer.
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Thank you, Nancy. How are you doing these days? I miss our staff kitchen lunches… 😊
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I am in a hearty agreement with Nancy as this being one of your best yet. In the search for answers, beauty is born through words and acceptance is still being pursued as it tenaciously holds on ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you, Kim…A huge ‘yes’ to acceptance and tenacity as partners. 🙂
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