Shame on you – a poem and confession
by Elouise
Shame on you
Is not shame on me
I renounce your efforts
To fill my heart with
Your lust and shame
Bequeathed to you
By your father-preacher
When you were a sobbing
Child terrified lest you wake
Up one day in that fiery hell
You too once preached to
Children who believed the lie
That they entered this world
Sinners from the beginning
Now terrified of missing
That mercy for which you
Wept loudly and often
In the confines of your own
Terrified heart and soul
Wave your arms in the air
Send out your calls for sinners
To sob their way forward
Down the aisle filled
With shame and self-hatred
Believing a story that never
Belonged to them no matter
How many times they
Rushed down the aisle
Of your own deep shame
Somewhere along the way I lost the shame I carried from childhood. Shame that bound me as an adult, not just as a child.
Here’s how I see it now. Yes, there is right and there is wrong. No, God doesn’t create junk. Nor did God make sure I came with a bit of built-in sin for which I’m supposed to feel deep shame.
The shame came later. From others who introduced me to their shame long before I knew what was happening.
As a child, preachers and evangelists routinely reminded me that my heart was filled with sin from the day I was born. I watched other children repeatedly rushing down the aisle terrified lest they be thrown into a lake of fire when they died. I managed to raise my hand once, which felt like more than enough. After all, I got it at home, too.
At some point I had to take ownership of the woman I’d become. Still, scaring me and punishing me into repeated agonies of confession never helped me take ownership of myself. It simply kept me in a constant state of fear, shame and hyper-vigilance.
Ironically, these are the very things my Creator invites me to let go. Not because I’m a goody two-shoes, but because I’m loved just the way I am.
For that, I’m deeply grateful on this day of Sabbath rest.
© Elouise Renich Fraser, 28 October 2018
❤ ❤ ❤ such a strong post Super E ❤ ❤ ❤ great words from a woman with a beautiful soul ❤
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Oh thank you, Kim! Today as I was sitting in church I realized I don’t have all that shame I used to carry around like a precious cargo on my back. So when I came home I just started writing….and that’s what came out. I’m so glad I lived long enough to taste even a little bit of whatever it is I now have. 🙂
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I celebrate your shedding of shame, Elouise! No one needs that heavy load that weighs us down, rather than lifting us up so that we can begin to soar…
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Thanks, Debbie. 🙏🏻
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Thank you Eloise! It’s wonderful to have that guilt and shame taken away by the truth and love of God. I remember when I read that I was His Beloved it all just dropped from my shoulders and soul. I feel free to love myself fully as He does.
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Thank you, Kelly, for this personal comment. 🦋
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Wow. This is beautiful.
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Thank you, Herminia. I’m so grateful for the women and men and even the children who helped me find my way back to myself, if not God–who never left me alone.
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