The Ponds
by Elouise
Here’s a thought-provoking poem from Mary Oliver, followed by my comments.
The Ponds
Every year
the lilies
are so perfect
I can hardly believetheir lapped light crowding
the black,
mid-summer ponds.
Nobody could count all of them—the muskrats swimming
among the pads and the grasses
can reach out
their muscular arms and touchonly so many, they are that
rife and wild.
But what in this world
is perfect?I bend closer and see
how this one is clearly lopsided—
and that one wears an orange blight—
and this one is a glossy cheekhalf nibbled away—
and that one is a lumped purse
full of its own
unstoppable decay.Still, what I want in my life
is to be willing
to be dazzled—
to cast aside the weight of factsand maybe even
to float a little
above this difficult world.
I want to believe I am lookinginto the white fire of a great mystery.
I want to believe that the imperfections are nothing—that the light is everything—that it is more than the sum of each flawed blossom rising and fading. And I do.©Mary Oliver, in New and Selected Poems, Vol. One., pp. 92-93
Beacon Press, Boston, 1992
Of course imperfections aren’t necessarily nothing. Sometimes they’re distress calls. Or signs of neglect.
Still, like Mary Oliver, I also want and need to see big picture beauty in a water lily pond, garden or meadow. Because, as she puts it, “I want to believe [And I do!] I am looking into the white fire of a great mystery.”
The mystery, it seems to me, isn’t simply about water lilies. It’s also about us. Especially now. Not simply because each of us is beautiful, but because taken together, we reflect the light of a mystery beyond ourselves. Something beyond our beauty, our flaws, and our “unstoppable decay.” To say nothing of the muskrats (whose days are also numbered) looking to take us down one by one.
Especially now.
©Elouise Renich Fraser, 11 July 2019
Photo found at pixabay.com
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I’m pretty sure that all the blossoms started out perfect. But some were infected and some injured and some attacked but even so……………….
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……..they still have the ability together to point beyond themselves to something greater than themselves.
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sensitive people take a joy from very little pieces,
I look at small details and take a beauty in me
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It doesn’t take much, does it? Especially when we take time to notice beauty, no matter how small. Thanks for your comment.
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indeed ♡
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“The tar sheen night sky cloud briefly parted
A tired silver disc moon warily glimpsed
Hide back as more dark sky clouds closed wind swept
Again like the nights past weary unsettled“
Poeticous
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