sweet hush of silence
by Elouise
sweet hush of silence
fills the old woman’s ear
lulling her to sleep
I wrote this haiku just before I went to bed last night. Not because it’s fun (though it is!), but because the process requires focus on the present moment. Letting go of everything. Beginning to ‘see’ what’s staring me in the face. A gift, waiting for me to acknowledge its presence and then capture the moment on paper.
On 1 December 2017 I wrote my first haiku. It’s in my first haiku mini-notebook with about 100 others. Here’s what I wrote that day.
silence descends
over dismal swamp —
a child weeps
Though I haven’t written one a day for many months, I’m drawn to them during our current upheavals: Covid-19, Black Lives Matter, Climate Change, Loss of Protected Habitat, Building the “Wall” and Divide and Conquer moves having babies.
Gail Sher wrote one of the most helpful books I’ve read about writing. It’s called One Continuous Mistake. Actually, the title is about life and writing. Without mistakes, how will we learn? How will we discover and accept our humanity?
Haiku opens up insights and connections I wouldn’t otherwise notice. I’m not an expert. Still, I’m fascinated by the way writing haiku helps me see deeply into what’s in front of me, especially in nature and in human nature.
These days, writing haiku beats the TV screen, ubiquitous radio news feeds, and photos used to create shock, if not awe. It also reminds me that this is not my final home. I’m coming to feel more comfortable about being a wayfaring stranger passing through this life. Haiku helps me look for more than meets my eye.
Hanging in there with all of you. I can’t wait until this election is over, if not done with. Then the real work can begin, no matter who becomes the next POTUS.
Elouise♥
© Elouise Renich Fraser, 1 November 2020
Book cover image found at amazon.com
A short but well written article.
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Thank you.
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Dear Elouise,
Life itself is a kind of drafting process. We give it a try, reflect on the effort, then refine, reflect, and further refine. In some sense we’ll always be refining our efforts, be they intellectual, physical, vocational, or other. What we are aiming at seems a crucial question, as the answer will inform whatever refining we undertake…Thank you for a great rainy day reflection and haiku!
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writing of haiku
words carrying me away
to a better place
🙂
Your haiku are wonderful, Elouise! I always enjoy reading haiku…and trying to write it. 🙂
Hanging in there with you. It will definitely be an interesting week.
Prayers, ❤ , and (((HUGS)))
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Almost too interesting!!! 🙂 Thanks for your haiku-comment! 🙂 And yes…prayer, deep breaths and relief that the One who watches over us is wiser and smarter than we are. Hugs!
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Hi Elouise,
Are you familiar with Lize Bard over at https://wandererhaiku.wordpress.com/
A steady flow of haiku, there. (Although the flow has stopped since 24 Oct – hmm, now I’m worried…)
I have written a bit of haiku, but not much. I’ll try to find some and post it.
I really like the ones you shared here.
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Oh yes! I used to read Lize Bard’s haikus regularly, and she visited my site from time to time. That was at least three years ago. I just went over and checked out her latest posts. Beautiful pairing of visuals and content. Thanks for your kind comment about the two I posted! 🙂
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