sorrow and love
by Elouise
When I was very young
my heart learned early
the feeling of being trapped
with no safe alternatives
I believed a lifetime of
blessed freedom was
just around the corner—
the ‘real’ life I for which
I longed and dreamed
every day and night
of my restless childhood
My time would come and
I would emerge from my
imaginary butterfly chrysalis
fluttering away on clouds
of imaginary bliss and freedom
far from my father
The older I get, the more I understand the dynamics of our small family of four daughters. Especially the mammoth workload my mother carried.
When she was 5, my mother was abandoned by her own mother. When she was 28 and I was 5, polio took over her body, including her ability to swallow safely or speak clearly. Then there was my father, whose childhood and youth were littered with brutal beatings from his own father.
Back in the 1940s and 50s I didn’t appreciate how much our mother did to keep us alive. Not because she stood in for our father, but because she cared deeply for her daughters. Each of us. No matter how we rated on Daddy’s Rules for Good Girls, and though she had never experienced safe love from her own mother.
I used to think I would get beyond the grief of our family. But here’s the deal: no pain, no gain; and, surprisingly, no true sorrow without growing love.
This week has been long and sometimes difficult. Not just here, but around the world. The numbers of families being torn apart have skyrocketed. Am I ready for whatever comes next? Somehow all this has prompted me to revisit my relationship with my mother.
My mother, in spite of her disabilities and her own sad family background, helped keep my spirit alive. She died when she was almost 78 years old. Though her body was worn out, some of her spirit still lives in me. Especially now.
Thanks for stopping by.
Elouise
© Elouise Renich Fraser, 26 March 2022
Photo found at wikimedia.com
Elouise, you have made me want to learn about poetry. I believe I’ve told you that I’ve never really understood the genre, reading it as though it were prose.
After reading a poetry for dummies type article, I took their suggestions. I thought about the title, read the poem aloud several times, thought about the first and last ideas, listened for the rhythm, the sounds of words, the imagery, any historical references, etc.
I loved it. I got so much more from your poem than I had before I read and implemented the dummies article. Wonderful!
Thank you for writing your poetry and your prose. Thank you for being so important that I wanted to grasp more of what you were saying in a genre that I had previously just tolerated.
I thank God for you. Thank you for sharing that sorrow and love can exist at the same time and in the same person.
Marilyn
On Sat, Mar 26, 2022, 12:15 PM Telling the Truth wrote:
> Elouise posted: ” When I was very young my heart learned early the feeling > of being trapped with no safe alternatives I believed a lifetime of blessed > freedom was just around the corner— the ‘real’ life I for which I longed > and dreamed every day and night of my” >
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Oh, Marilyn, you’re so welcome. What a lovely comment. I’m quite taken by it. Yes, sorrow and love can exist as you say, “at the same time and in the same person.” By the time we get ready to make our departures, maybe we’ll be human. Truly human, and unafraid to acknowledge it.
Elouise
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I see we have both, over time, developed a deeper understanding of our mothers. Although I could never have claimed to be close to mine, I do empathise with the lousy hand that life dealt her and wish it had been different for her.
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Indeed. My mother had a lousy life also…which, I think, programmed her to be a caretaker of everyone. She was the oldest child, only 5 years old when her mother ran off with another (richer!) man and literally kidnapped her very young son and drove across country to what she thought would be heaven. Without warning, she returned him to my grandfather after a few years. He was too much trouble! My mother became a surrogate mom to her brother and learned very early to keep house and cook for everyone. Always the caretaker; rarely the one cared for–even after polio ravaged her body. My father, on the other hand, was expected to be catered to and obeyed without delay. It took me a long time to accept her inability to stand up for me against my father (who never accepted her as an equal partner). There are benefits to living long enough to see the larger picture, even though it changes nothing that happened in the past. Nor does it fill in gaps that remain. Thanks for your comment.
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Our mothers are our forlorn heroes. As a member of the misunderstood and taken for granted tribe, I continue to relate to my own misdeeds to my mother. One day, when we meet up again, I will apologize. In the meantime, I do my best to forgive my own Children’s neglect. Why? It’s a love thing. Forever my babies they’ll be.
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I hear your commitment to your ‘babies’! Your comment reminds me that women of any generation too often have the cards already stacked against them. I’m grateful for two adult children who love me in ways I never could love my mother. My wake-up call (as a daughter) came late. It was fraught with awkwardness (mine) and the reality that my mother could barely speak or function, due to debilitating health issues. Still, I’m glad I showed up for her as often as I could before she died peacefully in a hospice that treated her like the queen she was.
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Yes my mother ended her amazing but very handicapped life in a wonderful nursing home. Staff would come back after hours to play scrabble with her. She was much loved.
Elouise I have sent you a private email but I wonder if you have time to read them – or even get them. John’s sister
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Hi, Robin. Your mother was remarkable in every way. I think I would like to go out playing scrabble, too!
I did get your email and responded, though (I now know) not to the right address. My apologies. So…I just sent a copy of my reply on the 19th to your personal gmail account. Let me know if it still doesn’t get to you.
Elouise
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